
This is the first painting I did for this project. I painted with a looser, more expressive style than I used to during A Levels, and subsequently this took be a fraction of the time that a painting usually would. I think that this makes the piece more interesting than if it was realistic, and it also allowed me to take certain liberties with the anatomy of the figure as my reference was a life drawing that was nowhere near perfect and so the body would never be perfect.
The face in this painting is not as soft and delicate as I at first wanted, and the nose looks unfinished. I also think that I should have gone further with the expression of the piece and made it much less realistic and more stylised.
I started with an underpainting to get the general shape of the figure, then I gradually built up layers of detail until I reached the desired affect.
The main flaw with this painting is that I painted mostly from memory. This means that I am unconsciously projecting my own ideals of what the body should look like-or perhaps what I want my body to look like- onto the painting. This is a result of schema: the scene that my brain built up as a memory. This is generally not an accurate representation of the body as I only remember certain aspects correctly and my brain makes up the rest- it reconstructs it- as perceived by Bartlett in Reconstructive Memory Theory.
Above are some more responses to the painting, and what I might do on top of the actual painting. I think that I am going to write phrases over and over again all over the painting, but make it look like the first slide. I want to make sure that the finished piece of work doesn’t look like a life painting as it does now.
I also did an experiment sheet using acetate sheets over printed copies of the paintings that I then painted on top of.



















































